The fight scene, I think, wasn't as clear as it could have been.

I suck at fight scenes. Always have known this. What do you think could have been worded differently?


I don't like the fact that the blonde chick's name is left out for quite so long

I was worried about that too. I wasn't sure how to work it in earlier, though. Any suggestions?


and the dialog in the scene there seems as though it would fit better post-fight.

Hmm, okay. I'll play around and see what I can do.