Theater of War, Chapter Five
Jun. 4th, 2010 03:46 pmHello, eighteen-month delay. I kept getting this chapter out in spurts. Two paragraphs, lost interest. Two paragraphs, lost interest. But I told you I was chipping away at it. This thing hasn't been forgotten.
As always, comments and criticism. I'm afraid the chapter might seem disjointed with how long it took me to write it, so anything you point out can only help.
( Chapter Five )
As always, comments and criticism. I'm afraid the chapter might seem disjointed with how long it took me to write it, so anything you point out can only help.
( Chapter Five )